2011年4月27日 星期三

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There are two identical ladies hoodies selling in the two different clothing stores. The two ladies hoodies are both washable, and the size of Lourie’s is similar to that of Green’s. In addition, both Laurie’s and Green’s are cotton blend. Moreover, the various colors of ladies hoodies are alike. Last, the ladies hoodies in Lourie’s are at the same price as that in Green’s. Hence, if you want to buy ladies hoodies, you can choose any store you like.

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  1. There are two identical ladies hoodies selling in the two different clothing stores.
    是不是要用被動的 being sold
    Last, the ladies hoodies in Lourie’s are at the same price as that in Green’s.
    應該是as those吧 因為是複數

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  2. The two ladies hoodies are both washable...
    →The two ladies hoodies are both machine washable...
    (以上,淺見…)

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  3. There are two identical ladies hoodies selling
    "selling"→"sold"。

    In addition, both Laurie’s and Green’s are cotton blend.
    在下想在are的後面加"made of"。

    Hence, if you want to buy ladies hoodies, you can choose any store you like.
    "any"我想寫"either"。

    如有誤,請不吝嗇指教。

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  4. There are two identical ladies hoodies selling in the two different clothing stores.
    應該把selling改成sold

    以上囉

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  5. ladies hoodies selling in the two different clothing stores用selling的話是主動耶應該要用被動哦

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  6. There are two identical ladies hoodies selling in the two different clothing stores.
    這裡的selling要改成sold
    因為hoodies是被賣出~~

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  7. There are two identical ladies hoodies selling in the two different clothing stores.
    裡的 selling 我會寫 sold

    以上~
    好趕..
    我會加油的XDD
    ((謎:關你X事呀!

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  8. selling
    是sold吧

    好像也沒什麼錯了(思

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  9. There are two identical ladies hoodies "selling" in the two different clothing stores.
    是sold

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