John Adams and Thomas Jefferson have many similarities. For example, both John Adams and Thomas Jefferson played an important role in American Revolution. Additionally, John Adams delegated to the Continental Congress and so did Thomas Jefferson. They were also the signer of Declaration of Independence U.S. United States United States
用法大致上沒什麼問題吧 ^^
回覆刪除Finally, John Adams studied and practiced law as Thomas Jefferson.
回覆刪除→Finally, John Adams studied and practiced laws as Thomas Jefferson.
(以上，淺見…)
They were also the signer of Declaration of Independence.這裡signer應該要加s吧
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回覆刪除They were also the signer of Declaration of Independence.
回覆刪除signer要+s哦
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回覆刪除嗆拉搭((韓文←你一定知道是甚麼意思吧! 不說明囉!
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signer應該要S喔
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Besides, John Adams was the second U.S. president. Likewise, Thomas Jefferson was the third president of United States.
回覆刪除Likewise是比較相同的東西
所以我覺得不用強調他們是第幾屆的總統
直接說他們都當過總統就好了
They were quiet significant to ... and had a great influence ...
回覆刪除＂quiet＂應該是＂quite＂才對。
不曉得＂a＂可不可以刪去呢？
如有誤，請不吝嗇指教。