Why English become more and more important nowadays in Taiwan ? In my opinion, there are several reasons below. First of all, English is a commonly used language. It can eliminate the language barriers between two people from the different countries. For instance, if you meet a Korean, who don’t speak Chinese, but he knows English. Then you can understand and communicate with each other in English. Furthermore, good English ability also can help you find a job easily. In recent years, Taiwan is an island nation surrounding seas. And trading with the foreigners has become the main economic source in Taiwan . As a result, many corporations would regard the English ability as essentials. Consequently, the better English ability you have, the more chance you will be recruit. Last, but not least, with good English ability you can travel around the world without apprehensions. You won’t be in dread of the unknown conditions such as getting lost and not knowing how to reserve a room in an unfamiliar country. It’s because that you can use English to seek for someone’s help. And then you can have a wonderful vocation. In sum, promote your own English ability so that you will have a superior competitive strength in modern society.
Why English become more and more important nowadays in Taiwan? 我會寫:
回覆刪除Why does English become more and more important in Taiwan nowadays?
there are several reasons below.
我覺得應該是"Below are several reasons."
可是不確定這能否銜接前面的"In my opinion"。
English is a commonly used language.
在下喜好把"a"刪掉換成"the most"。
For instance, if you meet a Korean, who don’t speak Chinese, but he knows English. Then you can understand and communicate with each other in English.
我想改:If~, who doesn’t know Chinese but speaks English, you can ~.
good English ability also can help you find a job easily.
應該是"can also"吧。
In recent years, Taiwan is an island nation surrounding seas.
"surrounding seas"改成"surrounded by ocean"。
Consequently, …the more chance you will be recruit.
"recruit"→"recruited"。
"Last, but not least"中間不用逗號。
It’s because that you can use English to seek for someone’s help.
我覺得"that"和"for"可以去掉。
And then you can have a wonderful vocation.
妳是要寫"vacation"吧?
如有誤,請不吝嗇指教。
Taiwan is an island nation surrounding seas.
回覆刪除是不是要用surrounded啊?
Last, but not least
last後面應該不用逗號
And then you can have a wonderful vocation
vacation打錯了~~
Why English become more and more important nowadays in Taiwan.
回覆刪除裡的nowadays in Taiwan 我會將nowadays 與in Taiwan 互換!
俗話說的好:"先地後時"嘛~ =)
if you meet a Korean, who don’t speak Chinese, but he knows English.
裡的who don’t speak Chinese, but he knows English 可以來的大合併-也就是將","和"he"刪掉
簡潔又有力XD
Taiwan is an island nation surrounding seas.
裡的surrounding 我會去ING+ED
Last, but not least
裡的","且刪掉它!
以上~
辛苦了!
In recent years, Taiwan is an island nation surrounding seas.
回覆刪除被圍繞是surrounded哦
然後Last, but not least,
印象中應該是多了個逗點吧?
Last後面的逗點要去掉哦:)
...more important nowadays in Taiwan?
回覆刪除把nowadays跟in Taiwan換過來會不會比較好?
...good English ability also can help you...
換成good Englis ability can also help you
感覺比較好(認真
...nation surrounding seas...
是surrounded吧?
1.Why English become more and more important nowadays in Taiwan?
回覆刪除→Why does English become more and more important nowadays in Taiwan?
2.For instance, if you meet a Korean, who don’t speak Chinese, but he knows English.
→For instance, if you meet a Korean, who doesn't speak Chinese, but he knows English.
3.Furthermore, good English ability also can help you find a job easily.
→Furthermore, good English ability can also help you find a job easily.
4.In recent years, Taiwan is an island nation surrounding seas.
→老實說…這句我有點看不懂呢…island nation你是想寫島嶼國家嗎?只是不確定有否這種寫法。另外,surrounding似乎要換成surrounded with呢…
5.Consequently, the better English ability you have, the more chance you will be recruit.
→Consequently, the better English ability you have, the more chance you will be recruited.
6.Last, but not least, with good English ability you can travel around the world without apprehensions.
→Last but not least, with good English ability, you can travel around the world without apprehensions.
7.In sum, promote your own English ability so that you will have a superior competitive strength in modern society.
→In sum, promote your own English ability so that you will have superior competitiveness in modern society.(如果是想寫競爭力,應該是這個字才對…)
(以上,淺見…)
Why English become more and more important nowadays in Taiwan?
回覆刪除應該是why does English become ......吧
who don’t speak Chinese
我覺得改成who can't speak.....比較好耶
good English ability also can help you find a job easily.
那個also跟can應該要調換一下....吧
vacation拼錯囉!!!
以上.....
if you meet a Korean, who "don’t" speak Chinese,
回覆刪除這裡用can't比較好
good English ability "also can" help you find a job easily.
是can also
In recent years, Taiwan is an island nation surrounding seas. And trading with the foreigners has become the main economic source in Taiwan.
我覺得改成
In recent years, trading with the foreigners has become the main economic source in Taiwan because Taiwan is an island nation surrounded by the sea.
因為先前那一句看起來好像台灣是最近才被海給包圍
Last"," but not least,
不用逗號