Many people say I looked so serious and unfriendly when I don’t smile. But actually, I am an easygoing person as long as you are familiar with me. When I decide to do one thing, I will persistently carry through the work to the end, and do it with patience. I always adhere to principles that do not bother others and be kind-hearted. Being influenced by my family, I am enthusiastic about helping those who are in need, being responsible for everything I did.
After school, I would stay at school and review lessons in class with my classmates, so we could discuss what we didn’t understand about the class. Moreover, I would play volleyball with friends in order to win the intramural volleyball game, since I was selected as a member of participants in my class. However, I didn’t play very well, and I was a little afraid of playing volleyball with my teammates. Despite my recreance, they still pointed out my mistakes for correction patiently. This experience had taught me a lesson that never shrink back from difficulties.
姜姜棒棒
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Many people say I looked so serious and unfriendly when I don’t smile時態要一致= =
回覆刪除I will persistently carry through the work to the end應該是carry out 吧!
so we could discuss what we didn’t understand "about" the class應該改為in
應該是沒什麼問題吧
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I was a little afraid of playing volleyball with my teammates.
要不要再多解釋一點呢...
不然好像連貫不太起來耶(汗)
1.妳的時態喔~
回覆刪除Many people say I looked so serious and unfriendly when I don’t smile.
這句話是要用過去式還是現在是呢?
以上~
沒了!!!!
我也覺得你是一個很好的朋友喔!
>U<