2011年5月18日 星期三

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My friend and I are looking for an apartment to share near campus. I saw some descriptions of departments on the Internet, and they were different in many ways. There are two apartments that I’m considering, one is Fairfax Apartments and the other is CAMPUS APTS. Comparing the two apartments, Fairfax apartments has two large bedrooms; however, CAMPUS APTS. just has one bedroom. Additionally, Fairfax apartments is furnished and no pets while CAMPUS APTS. is unfurnished and pets allowed. Furthermore, Fairfax apartments is only 1250 dollars a month, included all utilities. But CAMPUS APTS is 900 dollars a month plus utilities. Each has specialized skills, and I am vexed about choosing which one.

5 則留言:

  1. 要不要全部都改成過去式比較好?
    現在式跟過去式夾雜在一起了@@

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  2. 你的時態問題很常出現喔!!!
    請一致!謝謝!

    There are two apartments that I’m considering, one is Fairfax Apartments and the other is CAMPUS APTS
    這一句沒有連接詞

    while CAMPUS APTS. is unfurnished and pets allowed
    我覺得把and改成but會比較順

    最後要做出選擇!!!(老師有說@@

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  3. 同意25的說法~~
    跟他意見差不多:D

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  4. 是要先選擇一間再作比較哦
    然後時態問題...其實我覺得我知道你的意思 所以我也不知道應該怎麼改...

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  5. There are two apartments that I’m considering, one is Fairfax Apartments and the other is CAMPUS APTS.
    這具逗號後面沒有連接詞耶@@
    直接改成句號吧~~~

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