My friend and I are looking for an apartment to share near campus. I saw some descriptions of departments on the Internet, and they were different in many ways. There are two apartments that I’m considering, one is Fairfax Apartments and the other is CAMPUS APTS. Comparing the two apartments, Fairfax apartments has two large bedrooms; however, CAMPUS APTS. just has one bedroom. Additionally, Fairfax apartments is furnished and no pets while CAMPUS APTS. is unfurnished and pets allowed. Furthermore, Fairfax apartments is only 1250 dollars a month, included all utilities. But CAMPUS APTS is 900 dollars a month plus utilities. Each has specialized skills, and I am vexed about choosing which one.
要不要全部都改成過去式比較好?
回覆刪除現在式跟過去式夾雜在一起了@@
你的時態問題很常出現喔!!!
回覆刪除請一致!謝謝!
There are two apartments that I’m considering, one is Fairfax Apartments and the other is CAMPUS APTS
這一句沒有連接詞
while CAMPUS APTS. is unfurnished and pets allowed
我覺得把and改成but會比較順
最後要做出選擇!!!(老師有說@@
同意25的說法~~
回覆刪除跟他意見差不多:D
是要先選擇一間再作比較哦
回覆刪除然後時態問題...其實我覺得我知道你的意思 所以我也不知道應該怎麼改...
There are two apartments that I’m considering, one is Fairfax Apartments and the other is CAMPUS APTS.
回覆刪除這具逗號後面沒有連接詞耶@@
直接改成句號吧~~~