I am hiring a new English instructor for my school, and I received two resumes from people applying for the job. Contrasting two people, Debra has more education than Lynn Lynn Lynn Lynn Lynn
Contrasting two people, Debra has more education than Lynn.
回覆刪除感覺前面用compared to會比較好
應該沒什麼錯了(笑)
回覆刪除時態一樣比較好喔~~
回覆刪除Contrasting two people, Debra has more education than Lynn.
前面一句的主詞跟後面的不一樣
這句要改喔
excellence是不是應該改成excellent?
後面錄取的原因可以再詳細一點
以上(我累我想睡
1.Contrasting two people, Debra has more education than Lynn.
回覆刪除→Contrast two people, Debra has more education than Lynn.
2.But Lynn is excellence in Teaching Award 2004 while Debra isn't awarded any prize.
→But Lynn is excellent in Teaching Award 2004 while Debra isn't awarded any prize.
3.Lynn is proficient in Spanish, French and Japanese, whereas Debra is only master of French and swimming.
→Lynn is proficient in Spanish, French and Japanese, whereas Debra only masters French and swimming.
(以上，淺見…)
Contrasting two people, Debra has more education than Lynn.
回覆刪除前後的主詞不一致
Lynn is excellence in Teaching Award 是不是要用excellent呢?
回覆刪除可以寫詳細一點ˇ哦
But Lynn is excellence in Teaching...
回覆刪除在下想寫：＂...Lynn is excellent at getting Tea～＂
如有誤，請不吝嗇指教。
After comparing the two people, I decide to hire Lynn, for her outstanding language ability.
回覆刪除comparing後面加with哦~~~:D
Lynn is excellence in Teaching Award 2004
回覆刪除裡的excellence我想應該是excellent吧!
以上~
妳有寫錄取Lynn 原因"for her outstanding language ability."
不錯喔!