The Internet plays an important role in our daily life, and there are more and more people meeting people through online dating sites. However, I am on the same page as those who oppose the online meeting. While it is true that meeting people through online dating sites can make people connect more kinds of people from all over the world, I believe it is insecure if the person you meet on the Internet doesn’t tell the truth about himself or herself. You will get into trouble with this affair. Moreover, the Internet has the characteristic of secret. The person’s purpose of making friends through the Internet reminds unknown. Maybe he or she just wants to obtain money from you by deception. Last but not least, if you give him or her your personal information, it may affect your real life seriously. You may be disturbed if he or she continually pesters you. In sum, be careful while you really want to meet people through the Internet, and do not consent to him or her asking you out easily.
1.Moreover, the Internet has the characteristic of secret.
回覆刪除→Moreover, the people on the Internet may hold something undivulged.
(不知道妳的意思是…？這麼寫會讓我覺得「網路有『秘密的』個性」。)
2.The person’s purpose of making friends through the Internet reminds unknown.
→The person’s purpose of making friends through the Internet remains unknown.
3.In sum, be careful while you really want to meet people through the Internet, and do not consent to him or her asking you out easily.
→In sum, be careful when you really want to meet people through the Internet, and do not consent to his or her asking you out easily.
﹡總覺得我退化了…今天看姜姜的文章都好不懂~"~
以上，淺見…
Moreover, the Internet has the characteristic of secret.
回覆刪除這句很怪
remains應該改成remains
恩恩
The person’s purpose of making friends through the Internet reminds unknown.
回覆刪除應該是remain吧? remind不是提醒嗎
In sum, be careful while you really want to meet people through the Internet, and do not consent to him or her asking you out easily.
這句語意好像有點不順 >"<
reminds 應該是錯字吧?
回覆刪除remains 才對喔
While it is true that meeting people through online dating sites can make people connect more kinds of people from all over the world,
回覆刪除這句from可以刪掉哦
reminds改成remains^^
who oppose the online meeting我在想是不是不用加the
回覆刪除You will get into trouble with this affair這具有點突兀耶 為什麼網友說謊我們就會有麻煩呢??應該多敘述一點
purpose of making friends through the Internet reminds是remain吧 不過還是怪怪的
後面還不錯~
reminds
回覆刪除是要寫remain嗎?
The person’s purpose of making friends through the Internet reminds unknown.
回覆刪除裡的reminds 是reminds喔!
以上~
親故呀..
妳的寫作越寫越好了喔!
我都快看不懂了
((阿~這是稱讚!
...and there are more and more people meeting people... 我會想寫：
回覆刪除＂...more and more people meeting each other...＂
You will get into trouble with this affair.
我想改＂...trouble because of this affair.＂
In sum, ...and do not consent to him or her asking you out easily. 在下想這樣改：
＂don't agree to go out with him/her easily when being asked.＂
（因為在下不懂＂consent＂的用法，所以寫這種最保險的…）
有些句子盯著看了好久…
不過，這也是進步的一種方式。
如有誤，請不吝嗇指教。