2011年6月9日 星期四

Expressing an Opinion-1-revised

     Should students be dressed in the bound uniforms? Despite the fact that wearing uniforms is uncomfortable and airtight, I think that it’s necessary for the students to wear uniforms to attend school because by wearing uniforms can make it easier to identify their students conveniently. Furthermore, wearing uniforms can improve the security of campus for the drillmasters or teachers keeping their eyes peeled when they see the students who wear the school’s uniforms. Finally, wearing uniforms will make the students more cohesive. When the students behave well off campus, the uniforms will represent the honor of the school. Consequently, I strongly believe that the students should wear uniforms.

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  1. by wearing uniforms can make it easier to identify their students conveniently.
    -->by wearing uniforms can we make it easier to identify their students conveniently.

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