Autobiography Final

Family Background

My name is Pei-Yin, Jiang. I was born in a harmonious family. There are five people in my family, including my parents, one brother, one younger sister, and me. My father is a board mould master worker. He is an easygoing person. I learn to treat people kindly and always be enthusiastic about helping people from him. Furthermore, he also teaches me that harmony is most precious. He is the person who I admire most. My mother is an efficient career woman, who is a female tycoon in my eyes. Her motto is “Failure is nothing to be ashamed of. What’s shameful is losing motivation because of it.” Consequently, she always stirs me to try out everything courageously, and always reminds me about that everyone makes mistakes, so do not be afraid. My brother and sister are students. When we encounter difficulties, we would give each other a hand. Brought up in such a nice family, I have become a responsible, honest and mild-mannered person.

                                                          

School life

I am studying at Department of Applied Foreign Languages in National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School. I’m glad to choose the NTCVS as my senior high school. It’s a pleasure to befriend my classmates. They are always willing to bear me a hand when I encountered difficulties. We study together and encourage each other to be more hard-working. Teaching and learning promote each other. Hence, we all make great progress in English.

I served as the head of the cleaning crew as a freshman and served as the treasurer when I am a senior. As the head of the cleaning crew, I needed to ensure everyone has done their clean-up work and keep our class clean. Moreover, when I was the treasurer in our class, I needed to take care of our class fees. These experiences help me learn how to be more responsible to anything. Furthermore, I also learned how to cooperate with my classmates harmoniously in order to make our class better. And I realized that it was not easy to lead a whole class to finish one thing, it needed everyone’s coordination. It’s really a worthy experience.

Self-evaluation

Many people say I look so serious and unfriendly when I don’t smile. But actually, I am an easygoing person as long as you are familiar with me. When I decide to do one thing, I will persistently carry through the work to the end, and do it with patience. I always adhere to principles that do not bother others and be kind-hearted. Being influenced by my family, I am enthusiastic about helping those who are in need, being responsible for everything I did.

After school, I would stay at school and review lessons in class with my classmates, so we could discuss what we didn’t understand in the class. Moreover, I would play volleyball with friends in order to win the intramural volleyball game, since I was selected as a member of participants in my class. However, I didn’t play very well, and I was a little afraid of playing volleyball with my teammates, due to their unfriendly facial expressions. Despite my recreance, they still pointed out my mistakes for correction patiently. This experience had taught me a lesson that never shrink back from difficulties.

Future Perspectives

Interested in English, I will choose English as my major in university, since I don’t want to stop making progress in my English ability. Hence, I will spare no efforts to strengthen all aspects of English abilities. What’s more, I’d like to be a useful person who can put what I have learned into practice in society. And I set up a goal to be an outstanding tour guide who is capable of introducing Taiwan to the whole world with excellent English ability and communicating with foreigners fluently. While now I haven’t had enough competency for being a tour guide because it requires a variety of knowledge. Therefore, I hope I can be admitted to the university to receive further training in all aspects of English skills. By doing so, I can achieve my dream step by step.

Conclusion

   I am really yearning to be admitted to National Kaohsiung University of Hospitality and Tourism. Although my English competence still leaves something to be desired, I will do my utmost to advance my ability and make good use of the four years in university. Sincerely, I hope that after you read my autobiography my qualification will affirm that I am a competitive applicant.

Future Perspectives_revised

   Interested in English, I will choose English as my major in university, since I don’t want to stop making progress in my English ability. Hence, I will spare no efforts to strengthen all aspects of English abilities. What’s more, I’d like to be a useful person who can put what I have learned into practice in society. And I set up a goal to be an outstanding tour guide who is capable of introducing Taiwan to the whole world with excellent English ability and communicating with foreigners fluently. While now I haven’t had enough competency for being a tour guide because it requires a variety of knowledge. Therefore, I hope I can be admitted to the university to receive further training in all aspects of English skills. By doing so, I can achieve my dream step by step.

self-evaluation_revised

   Many people say I look so serious and unfriendly when I don’t smile. But actually, I am an easygoing person as long as you are familiar with me. When I decide to do one thing, I will persistently carry through the work to the end, and do it with patience. I always adhere to principles that do not bother others and be kind-hearted. Being influenced by my family, I am enthusiastic about helping those who are in need, being responsible for everything I did.

   After school, I would stay at school and review lessons in class with my classmates, so we could discuss what we didn’t understand in the class. Moreover, I would play volleyball with friends in order to win the intramural volleyball game, since I was selected as a member of participants in my class. However, I didn’t play very well, and I was a little afraid of playing volleyball with my teammates, due to their unfriendly facial expressions. Despite my recreance, they still pointed out my mistakes for correction patiently. This experience had taught me a lesson that never shrink back from difficulties.

Future Perspectives

Interested in English, I will choose English as my major in university, since I don’t want to stop making progress on my English ability. Hence, I will spare no efforts to strengthen all aspects of English abilities. What’s more, I’d like to be a useful person who can put what I have learned into practice in society. And I set up a goal to be an outstanding tour guide who is capable of introducing Taiwan to the whole world with excellent English ability and communicating with foreigners fluently. While now I haven’t had enough competency for being a tour guide cause it requires a variety of knowledge. Therefore, I hope I can be admitted to the university to receive further training in all aspects of English skills. By doing so, I can achieve my dream step by step.

self-evaluation

Many people say I looked so serious and unfriendly when I don’t smile. But actually, I am an easygoing person as long as you are familiar with me. When I decide to do one thing, I will persistently carry through the work to the end, and do it with patience. I always adhere to principles that do not bother others and be kind-hearted. Being influenced by my family, I am enthusiastic about helping those who are in need, being responsible for everything I did.

After school, I would stay at school and review lessons in class with my classmates, so we could discuss what we didn’t understand about the class. Moreover, I would play volleyball with friends in order to win the intramural volleyball game, since I was selected as a member of participants in my class. However, I didn’t play very well, and I was a little afraid of playing volleyball with my teammates. Despite my recreance, they still pointed out my mistakes for correction patiently. This experience had taught me a lesson that never shrink back from difficulties. 

School life-revised

I am studying at Department of Applied Foreign Languages in National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School. I’m glad to choose the NTCVS as my senior high school. It’s a pleasure to befriend my classmates. They are always willing to bear me a hand when I encountered difficulties. We study together and encourage each other to be more hard-working. Teaching and learning promote each other. Hence, we all make great progress in English.

   I served as the head of the cleaning crew as a freshman and served as the treasurer when I am a senior. As the head of the cleaning crew, I needed to ensure everyone has done their clean-up work and keep our class clean. Moreover, when I was the treasurer in our class, I needed to take care of our class fees. These experiences help me learn how to be more responsible to anything. Furthermore, I also learned how to cooperate with my classmates harmoniously in order to make our class better. And I realized that it was not easy to lead a whole class to finish one thing, it needed everyone’s coordination. It’s really a worthy experience.

Family Background-revised

My name is Pei-Yin, Jiang. I was born in a harmonious family. There are five people in my family, including my parents, one brother, one younger sister, and me. My father is a board mould master worker. He is an easygoing person. I learn to treat people kindly and always be enthusiastic about helping people from him. Furthermore, he also teaches me that harmony is most precious. He is the person who I admire most. My mother is an efficient career woman, who is a female tycoon in my eyes. Her motto is “Failure is nothing to be ashamed of. What’s shameful is losing motivation because of it.” Consequently, she always stirs me to try out everything courageously, and always reminds me about that everyone makes mistakes, so do not be afraid. My brother and sister are students. When we encounter difficulties, we would give each other a hand. Brought up in such a nice family, I have become a responsible, honest and mild-mannered person.

School life

   I am studying at Department of Applied Foreign Languages in National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School. I’m glad to choose the NTCVS as my senior high school. It’s a pleasure to befriend with my classmates. They are always willing to bear me a hand when I encountered difficulties. We study together and encourage each other to be more hard-working. Teaching and learning promote and enhance each other. Hence, we all make a great progress in English.

   I served as the head of the cleaning crew as a freshman and served as the treasurer when I am a senior. As the head of the cleaning crew, I need to ensure everyone has done their clean-up work and keep our class clean. Moreover, when I was the treasurer in our class, I needed to take care of our class fees. These experiences help me learn how to be more responsible for anything. Furthermore, I also learned how to cooperate with my classmates harmoniously in order to make our class better. And I realized that it was not easy to lead a whole class to finish one thing, it needed everyone’s coordination. It’s really a worth experience.

Family Background

My name is Pei-Yin Jiang. I was born in a harmonious family. There are five people in my family, including my parents, one brother, one younger sister, and me. My father is a master formwork. He is an easygoing person. I learn from him that treating people genially, and that being enthusiastic about helping people. Furthermore, he also teaches me that harmony is most precious. My mother is an efficient career woman, who is a female tycoon in my eye. Hers motto is “Failure is nothing to be ashamed of. What’s shameful is losing motivation because of it.” Consequently, she always stirs me to try out everything courageously, and always reminds me about that everyone makes mistakes so do not be afraid. My brother and sister are students. When we encounter difficulties, we would give each other a hand. Brought up in such a nice family, I have become a responsible, honest and mild-mannered person.

autobiography-sample two

   My name is Guo-Shiang. Shawn is my English name. There are three people in my family, we are very close to each other. My mother is a hairdresser, she works in her own house. My younger sister is an employee in the service industry. I am a gentle and easy-going person, and I can integrate into a team easily. I love to read novels, listen to music, and go hiking during my free time.

   I graduated from Feng Chia University with a master's degree in applied mathematics. My study was a combination of mathematics and medicine. By analyzing the Luo-Rudy 1 model, a mathematical model for ventricular myocyte, a possibility that non-oscillatory excitable ventricular myocyte can turn into a pacemaker cell which has spontanieous oscillations was found. During my graduate study, I had learned lots of knowledge about medicine and been well-trained to work independently. I had been teaching assistant to teach Calculus and administrative assistant to help my teacher to handle some administrative matters for two years.

   After graduated, I was enrolled for military service as a corporal. So I had many chances to be a leader, to lead some soldiers to complete works. This experience made me learned the way to lead and the importance of teamwork. I always did my best to complete my work, so I won the superiors' trust and got some prizes.

   After completing my military service, I began preparing for the TOEIC exam. I expect to enhance my English ability and competitiveness. And I will continuously promote myself in the future, wish I could do better for company and to meet the demand of the industry. Furthermore, I hope I could enlarge my knowledge and broaden my horizon by working experience.

autobiography-sample one

I am Lin. Sophia is my English name. I am 18 years old, studying in a public girls’ high school. I come from a very happy middle class family. My father works in a bank and my mother works in a bookstore. I am not the so-called spoiled child. My parents make very sure of that by training me to be independent.

Throughout my academic career I have not only gotten good grades but also been very active on sport field and have involved in various societies. I play volleyball and enjoy the team spirit we have. I have joined the drama club and participated in many English speech contests. I really enjoy participating in school activities. I not only made many friends, but also gained many different valuable experiences.

I have been the class English tutor for almost three years. I like to discuss and share the experience of learning English with people a lot. We often read “China Post” and ”Time Magazine” and discuss the content, the word usage and practice speaking English by discussing the articles we have read. At the beginning we found it was quiet hard because we could rarely understand the content but we encouraged each other not to give up. Gradually we had made improvement, we were so excited by it that the group discussion of English books and magazines became one of the most enjoyable things for us every week. I have won the first prize of school English speech contest in second year of high school and many of my English speech contests in my second year of high school and many of my English articles were put on “Students Post.”

My fondness for English is developed from my childhood. It’s lonely to be the only child. I had no one to play with when I was a kid. My mom knew this so she took me with her all the time. Hence bookstores became my playground and books have been my playmates since I was young. My mom would show me those fancy books with cute illustrations on it. Firstly I was drawn by the pictures and then I was curious about these strange symbols called words. That was my first contact with English. As I was interested what those symbol meant, my parents taught me a bit. As they felt that I was eager to learn, they found me an English tutor. Thanks to my parents got the advantage of learning English by starting it at really early age.

My interest in English brought me to the world of English literature. I have been enchanted by this creative world since then, so I decide to major in English literature. My aim is to explore the world of literature and the world of great writers, to open my eyes and cultivate my mind through this great world of literature.

Besides English literature, I also have a wide range of hobbies. I love reading, Writing, music and movies. I have my active side as well, I enjoy swimming, hiking, raveling and going to the nature a lot. I believe we must have balance in our lives, As to my personality. I am creative, optimistic, determined, willing to help others and down to earth.
I want to be one of the literature students who have the privilege of studying great writers’ work and exploring their inner world, their outlook of life and their role as learned scholars and their influence on the world. I can also do little contribution to awaking the awareness of culture and literature in our society since its importance has been neglected by us.

Best works of the semester-3

     Should students be dressed in the bound uniforms? Despite the fact that wearing uniforms is uncomfortable and airtight, I think that it’s necessary for the students to wear uniforms to attend school because by wearing uniforms can we make it easier to identify their students conveniently. Furthermore, wearing uniforms can improve the security of campus for the drillmasters or teachers keeping their eyes peeled when they see the students who wear the school’s uniforms. Finally, wearing uniforms will make the students more cohesive. When the students behave well off campus, the uniforms will represent the honor of the school. Consequently, I strongly believe that the students should wear uniforms.

Best works of the semester-2

     The Internet plays an important role in our daily life, and there are more and more people meeting each other through online dating sites. However, I am on the same page as those who oppose the online meeting. While it is true that meeting people through online dating sites can make people connect more kinds of people all over the world, I believe it is insecure if the person you meet on the Internet doesn’t tell the truth about himself or herself. You will get into trouble because of this affair. Moreover, the people on the Internet may hold something undivulged. The person’s purpose of making friends through the Internet remains unknown. Maybe he or she just wants to obtain money from you by deception. Last but not least, if you give him or her your personal information, it may affect your real life seriously. You may be disturbed if he or she continually pesters you. In sum, be careful when you really want to meet people through the Internet, and do not consent to his or her asking you out easily.

Best works of the semester-1

     Why does English become more and more important in Taiwan nowadays? Below are several reasons. First of all, English is the most commonly used language. It can eliminate the language barriers between two people from the different countries. For instance, if you meet a Korean, who doesn’t know Chinese but speaks English, you can understand and communicate with each other in English. Furthermore, good English ability can also help you find a job easily. In recent years, Taiwan is an island nation surrounded by ocean. And trading with the foreigners has become the main economic source in Taiwan. As a result, many corporations would regard the English ability as essentials. Consequently, the better English ability you have, the more chance you will be recruited. Last but not least, with good English ability you can travel around the world without apprehensions. You won’t be in dread of the unknown conditions such as getting lost and not knowing how to reserve a room in an unfamiliar country. It’s because you can use English to seek someone’s help. And then you can have a wonderful vacation. In sum, promote your own English ability so that you will have superior competitiveness in modern society.

Disscusing effects-2_revised

     I am a member of a group of progressive residents that want Acton to change. There are several reasons why I advocate managing the factory on the town. First of all, there will be more jobs so that the residents can get jobs easily and they can work near their home. Secondly, the benefits made by the factory can bring more public recreational facilities to the locals. Thirdly, the natives can access to more people and learn more information from these new residents. In short, although the change at short notice may disturb some locals, I am still strongly on the same page of the operating of the factory.

Disscusing effects-1_revised

     The presence of global warming has several effects on society. First, the global warming drives the temperature up every year, and outdoor activities become all the more difficult to humans. Moreover, the rising seas threaten some animals’ subsistence including human beings. And there will be less and less place for animals to perch. Third, the extinction of animals may affect the ecological balance that supports our lives. Consequently, we should not waste our precious energy, and do something subservient for Natural Mother lest it should counterattack.

discussing cause-2_revised

I have made an important decision to get married with someone I love. There are some reasons why I made this decision. First of all, after getting married, I can have someone rely on when I get into trouble, and we can face all the difficulties in our lives together. Second, I can have someone earn money with me, and we can pursue our dreams, such as buying a house on our own. Moreover, we can establish a harmonious home consisted of sweet couple and many lovely children. Third, I can have someone keep me company. When I feel sad, lonely, upset or anxious, my husband can listen to me and comfort me. He will be the spiritual support of me. To sum up, once I make up my mind, then I will persevere in my efforts.

discussing cause-1_revised

There are several reasons why Michael Williams’ business failed. First of all, the location of the music store is not ideal. It’s located on a small street and it’s just 3 miles away from a shopping center that has two large music stores. As a result, Williams’ store is hard to be found and it's easy to be defeated by the other two large shops. Second, the categories of the CDs sold in the store are less than other stores, so customers do not have enough option to choose. Third, the operating hours are too short, and the time that the store opened is improper. When the store opens, many people don’t have leisure time to shop for CDs. Last, Williams doesn’t make good use of money. He bought too many CDs at the first time, and he doesn’t consider whether the price of the CDs is appropriate or not. Moreover, Williams’ store is small, but he employs two sale clerks. Consequently, the cost of staffs and CDs brings Williams to his knee. In short, Williams should have thought twice before he decides to operate a music store lest the store should shut down.

Expressing an Opinion-2-revised

     The Internet plays an important role in our daily life, and there are more and more people meeting each other through online dating sites. However, I am on the same page as those who oppose the online meeting. While it is true that meeting people through online dating sites can make people connect more kinds of people all over the world, I believe it is insecure if the person you meet on the Internet doesn’t tell the truth about himself or herself. You will get into trouble because of this affair. Moreover, the people on the Internet may hold something undivulged. The person’s purpose of making friends through the Internet remains unknown. Maybe he or she just wants to obtain money from you by deception. Last but not least, if you give him or her your personal information, it may affect your real life seriously. You may be disturbed if he or she continually pesters you. In sum, be careful when you really want to meet people through the Internet, and do not consent to his or her asking you out easily.

Expressing an Opinion-1-revised

     Should students be dressed in the bound uniforms? Despite the fact that wearing uniforms is uncomfortable and airtight, I think that it’s necessary for the students to wear uniforms to attend school because by wearing uniforms can make it easier to identify their students conveniently. Furthermore, wearing uniforms can improve the security of campus for the drillmasters or teachers keeping their eyes peeled when they see the students who wear the school’s uniforms. Finally, wearing uniforms will make the students more cohesive. When the students behave well off campus, the uniforms will represent the honor of the school. Consequently, I strongly believe that the students should wear uniforms.

Disscusing effects-2

     I am a member of a group of progressive residents that want Acton to change. There are several reasons why I advocate managing the factory on the town. First of all, it will be more jobs so that the residents can get a job easily and they can work near their home. Secondly, the benefits made form the factory can bring more public recreational facilities to the local. Thirdly, the natives can access to more people and learn more information form these new residents. In short, although the change at short notice may disturb some locals, I am still strongly on the same page of the operating of the factory.

Disscusing effects-1

     The presence of global warming has several effects on society. First, the temperature continuously elevates, and outdoors become all the more difficult to humans. Moreover, the rise of sea level threatens some animals’ subsistence including human beings. And there will be less and less place for animals to perch. Third, the extinct of animals may affect the ecological balance that maintains our life. Consequently, we should not waste our precious energy sources, and do something subservient for Natural Mother lest it should counterattack.

contrasting-2_revised

     I am hiring a new English instructor for my school, and I received two resumes from people applying for the job. Contrast two people, Debra has more education than Lynn. Besides, Debra is more experienced than Lynn in employment. But Lynn is excellent in Teaching Award 2004 while Debra isn’t awarded any prize. Additionally, Lynn is proficient in Spanish, French and Japanese, whereas Debra only masters French and swimming. After comparing with the two people, I decide to hire Lynn, for her outstanding language ability.

Comparing-3_revised

Comparing with the two movies I had seen, there were several similarities between them.  One was Hanna while the other was The Lovely Bones. Both of them starred the same heroine called Saoirse Ronan. Moreover, Hanna as well as The Lovely Bones was adapted from original novels. Last, the plot of Hanna was exciting and adventurous. Likewise, the circumstances of The Lovely Bones were thrilling and breathtaking. These two movies are so fascinating that they are really worth watching.

Discussing Cause-2

     I have made an important decision to get married with someone I love. There are some reasons why I made this decision. First of all, after getting married, I can have someone to rely on when I get into trouble, and we can face all the difficulties in our life together. Second, after getting married, I can have someone earn money with me, and we can pursue our dreams, such as buying a house on our own. Third, after getting married, I can have someone to keep my company. When I feel sad, lonely, upset or anxious, my husband can listen to me and comfort me. To sum up, once I make up my mind, then I will persevere in my efforts.

Discussing Cause-1

There are several reasons why Michael Williams’ business failed. First of all, the location of the music store is not ideal. It’s located on a small street and it’s just 3 miles away from a shopping center that has two large music stores. As a result, Williams’ store is hard to be found and it's easy to be defeated by the other two large shops. Second, the category of the CDs sold in the store is less than other stores, so customers do not have enough option to choose. Third, the operating hours are too short, and the timing that the store opened is improper. When the store open, there are not many people have leisure time to shop for CDs. Last, Williams doesn’t make good use of money. He bought too many CDs at the first time, and he doesn’t consider whether the price of the CDs is appropriate or not. Moreover, Williams’ store is small, but he employs two sale clerks. Consequently, the cost of staffs and CDs bring Williams to his knee. In short, Williams should think twice before he decided to operate a music store lest the store should shut down.

Expressing an Opinion-2

     The Internet plays an important role in our daily life, and there are more and more people meeting people through online dating sites. However, I am on the same page as those who oppose the online meeting. While it is true that meeting people through online dating sites can make people connect more kinds of people from all over the world, I believe it is insecure if the person you meet on the Internet doesn’t tell the truth about himself or herself. You will get into trouble with this affair. Moreover, the Internet has the characteristic of secret. The person’s purpose of making friends through the Internet reminds unknown. Maybe he or she just wants to obtain money from you by deception. Last but not least, if you give him or her your personal information, it may affect your real life seriously. You may be disturbed if he or she continually pesters you. In sum, be careful while you really want to meet people through the Internet, and do not consent to him or her asking you out easily. 

Expressing an Opinion-1

     Should students be dressed in the bound uniforms? Despite the fact that wearing uniforms is uncomfortable and air tight, I think that it’s necessary for the students to wear uniforms to attend school because by wearing uniforms can a crowded school identify their students conveniently. Furthermore, wearing uniforms can improve the security of campus for the drillmasters or teachers will keep their eyes peeled when they see the students who wear the school’s uniforms. Finally, wearing uniforms will make the students more consolidated and have more centripetal force. When the students behave well off campus, the uniforms will represent the honor of the school. Consequently, I strongly believe that the students should put on uniforms.

Comparing-2_revised

John Adams and Thomas Jefferson have many similarities. For example, both John Adams and Thomas Jefferson played an important role in American Revolution. Additionally, John Adams delegated to the Continental Congress and so did Thomas Jefferson. They were also the signers of Declaration of Independence. Besides, John Adams was the second U.S. president. Likewise, Thomas Jefferson was the third president of United States. Finally, John Adams studied and practiced laws as Thomas Jefferson. They were quite significant to United States and had great influence on their society.

Comparing-1_revised

There are two identical ladies hoodies sold in the two different clothing stores. The two ladies hoodies are both washable, and the size of Lourie’s is similar to that of Green’s. In addition, both Laurie’s and Green’s are made of cotton blend. Moreover, the various colors of ladies hoodies are alike. Last, the ladies hoodies in Lourie’s are at the same price as that in Green’s. Hence, if you want to buy ladies hoodies, you can choose either store you like.

contrasting-2

I am hiring a new English instructor for my school, and I received two resumes from people applying for the job. Contrasting two people, Debra has more education than Lynn. Besides, Debra is more experienced than Lynn in employment. But Lynn is excellence in Teaching Award 2004 while Debra isn’t awarded any prize. Additionally, Lynn is proficient in Spanish, French and Japanese, whereas Debra is only master of French and swimming. After comparing the two people, I decide to hire Lynn, for her outstanding language ability.

contrasting-1

My friend and I are looking for an apartment to share near campus. I saw some descriptions of departments on the Internet, and they were different in many ways. There are two apartments that I’m considering, one is Fairfax Apartments and the other is CAMPUS APTS. Comparing the two apartments, Fairfax apartments has two large bedrooms; however, CAMPUS APTS. just has one bedroom. Additionally, Fairfax apartments is furnished and no pets while CAMPUS APTS. is unfurnished and pets allowed. Furthermore, Fairfax apartments is only 1250 dollars a month, included all utilities. But CAMPUS APTS is 900 dollars a month plus utilities. Each has specialized skills, and I am vexed about choosing which one.

comparing-3

Comparing to the two movies I had seen, there are several similarities between them.  One is Hanna and the other is The Lovely Bones. Both of them star by the same heroine called Saoirse Ronan. Moreover, Hanna as well as The Lovely Bones is adapted from original novels. Last, the plot of Hanna is exciting and adventurous. Likewise, the circumstances of The Lovely Bones are thrilling and breathtaking. These two movies are so fascinating that they are really worth watching.

Why is English important?_revised

     Why does English become more and more important in Taiwan nowadays? Below are several reasons. First of all, English is the most commonly used language. It can eliminate the language barriers between two people from the different countries. For instance, if you meet a Korean, who doesn’t know Chinese but speaks English, you can understand and communicate with each other in English. Furthermore, good English ability can also help you find a job easily. In recent years, Taiwan is an island nation surrounded by ocean. And trading with the foreigners has become the main economic source in Taiwan. As a result, many corporations would regard the English ability as essentials. Consequently, the better English ability you have, the more chance you will be recruited. Last but not least, with good English ability you can travel around the world without apprehensions. You won’t be in dread of the unknown conditions such as getting lost and not knowing how to reserve a room in an unfamiliar country. It’s because you can use English to seek someone’s help. And then you can have a wonderful vacation. In sum, promote your own English ability so that you will have superior competitiveness in modern society.

Describing a person-revised

     I travel with my grandmother together. And I am looking for my grandmother who has strayed. My grandmother is an elegant lady. She is a little short and plump. In addition, she has short, curly silvery white hair as well as big eyes. Moreover, her face is covered with wrinkles. When she was last seen, she was dressed in a red knitted coat and gray pants. Last, my phone number is 0912-345-678. If you see her, please contact with me as soon as possible, thank you.

Comparing-2

John Adams and Thomas Jefferson have many similarities. For example, both John Adams and Thomas Jefferson played an important role in American Revolution. Additionally, John Adams delegated to the Continental Congress and so did Thomas Jefferson. They were also the signer of Declaration of Independence. Besides, John Adams was the second U.S. president. Likewise, Thomas Jefferson was the third president of United States. Finally, John Adams studied and practiced law as Thomas Jefferson. They were quiet significant to United States and had a great influence on their society.

Comparing-1

There are two identical ladies hoodies selling in the two different clothing stores. The two ladies hoodies are both washable, and the size of Lourie’s is similar to that of Green’s. In addition, both Laurie’s and Green’s are cotton blend. Moreover, the various colors of ladies hoodies are alike. Last, the ladies hoodies in Lourie’s are at the same price as that in Green’s. Hence, if you want to buy ladies hoodies, you can choose any store you like.

Why is English important?

Why English become more and more important nowadays in Taiwan? In my opinion, there are several reasons below. First of all, English is a commonly used language. It can eliminate the language barriers between two people from the different countries. For instance, if you meet a Korean, who don’t speak Chinese, but he knows English. Then you can understand and communicate with each other in English. Furthermore, good English ability also can help you find a job easily. In recent years, Taiwan is an island nation surrounding seas. And trading with the foreigners has become the main economic source in Taiwan. As a result, many corporations would regard the English ability as essentials. Consequently, the better English ability you have, the more chance you will be recruit. Last, but not least, with good English ability you can travel around the world without apprehensions. You won’t be in dread of the unknown conditions such as getting lost and not knowing how to reserve a room in an unfamiliar country. It’s because that you can use English to seek for someone’s help. And then you can have a wonderful vocation. In sum, promote your own English ability so that you will have a superior competitive strength in modern society.

Describing a Process-4: How to plan a trip_revised

Planning a trip yourself can be very easy. First, you need to know whom you would go with so that you can continue the following steps. Second, decide the place where you want to take a trip and what you would like to do there. Then you can begin to make the schedule about your trip or you would delay your trip. Next, you have to reserve a room, a restaurant, and some places where you have to make reservations. Afterwards, prepare some personal supplements and medicine for a rainy day. Finally, go to bed earlier than normal with expectance, and enjoy your trip tomorrow.

Describing a person

I travel together with my grandmother. And I am looking for my grandmother who has strayed. My grandmother is an elderly lady. She is a little short and plump. In addition, she has short, curly silvery white and big eyes. And her face is covered with wrinkles. When she was last seen, she was dressed in a red knitted coat and gray pants. If you see her, please contact with me as soon as possible, thank you.

Describing a Process-4: How to plan a trip

Planning a trip yourself can be very easy. First, you need to know whom you will go with so that you can continue the following steps. Second, decide the place where you will take a trip and what you will do there. Then you can begin to make the schedule about your trip or you will delay your trip. Next, you have to reserve a room, a restaurant, and some places that need previous reservation. Afterwards, prepare some personal effects and medicine to provide against a rainy day. Finally, go to bed earlier than normal with expectance, and enjoy your trip tomorrow.

Explaining a Process-3

It’s easy for you to get from the First Bank of the United States to the Free Quaker Meeting House if you follow these directions. First, go north one block along Third Street from the First Bank of the United States. Then turn left on Market Street. Continue three blocks on Market Street to Sixth Street. The Free Quaker Meeting House is on your right.

Explaining a Process-2

There is a simple experiment can prove that black is a better collector of solar energy than white. Before the experiment, you need to prepare two tin cans, black and white paint as well as a room thermometer. First, paint the cans-one black, one white. Second, fill the cans with water. After that, put the cans in direct sunlight for three hours. Finally, check the temperature of the water in the cans and compare. Then you can reach a conclusion that the temperature of the water in the black can is higher.

Explaining a Process-1

It's easy to pot a plant if you follow the right procedure. First, cover bottom of pot with small stones. Second, put two inches of soil on top of rocks. Then make a hole in center of soil. After that, drop plant into soil. Next, add soil until it almost reaches top of pot. And press soil down with thumbs. Finally, water the plant. The most important thing to remember is to take good care of the plant after you finished.

An unforgettable experience_revised

     I had an unforgettable experience and I thought it was a bit ridiculous. One day, I went on a picnic with my family. It was a sunny day. We rode the bikes with pleasure, and enjoyed the scenery on the way with the warm breeze blowing over our faces. On the roadside standed several telegraph poles. Out of fun, I beat the poles while I was riding. All of a sudden, I fell into the postern paddy field with my bike. Everyone was frightened at what happened to me. I was covered with the dirt and my whole body was wet due to the moist mud in the paddy field. Fortunately, I didn’t get hurt, but our picnic fell through. Afterwards, my strange appearance attracted the attention of the passers-by all the way. It was the most embarrassing and unforgettable experience I had had. Being in such a humiliating situation taught me to be more careful.

An unforgettable experience

     Once upon a time, I went on a picnic with my family. It was a sunny and windy day. We rode the bike with real delight, and enjoyed the scenery on the way with the wind blowing on our face. On the roadside standed several telegraph poles. Out of fun, I beat the poles while I was riding. All of a sudden, I fell into the postern paddy field with my bike. Everyone was frightened at what happened to me. I was covered with the dirt and my whole body was wet due to the mud in the paddy field was moist. Fortunately, I didn’t get hurt, but our picnic fell through. Afterwards, my strange appearance attracted the attention of the passerby all the way. It was the most embarrassing and unforgettable experience I had. Being in such an humiliating situation taught me to be more careful.

My favorite plot of the movie_revised

     My favorite plot of the movie was very sorrowful. I watched the movie with my tears rolling down my face. There was a family, which was composed of a five-year-old boy and a young couple. They used to lead a happy life until one day the heroine found that she was diagnosed with cancer. But she still had a lot of things that she wanted to do with her child and husband. Unfortunately, she couldn't finish her wish before she died. After the heroine's death, the leading man and his son couldn't take good care of themselves. Neverless, they still had to live in a life without their lovely family member. Several years later, the heroine came back in the rainy season which was the most joyful time that they once had. Although she had brought back to life, she couldn't remember anything about her son and husband. In the end of the story, the leading man and his son tried hard to help their lovely family member remember the happy time they once had. However, the heroine still had to return with the sweet memory when the rainy season was over. Although she could no longer stay with her family in the future, she had finally finished all her wish. The plot of the movie was so touching that it made me more appreciate the time with my family. I would not mind recommending you this movie.

My favorite plot of the movie

     My favorite plot of the movie was very sorrowful. I watched the movie with my tears rolling down my face. There was a family, which was composed of a five-year-old boy and a young couple. They used to lead a happy life until one day the heroine found that she was diagnosed with cancer. But she still had a lot of things that she want to do with her child and husband. Unfortunately, she couldn't finish her wish before she die. After the heroine's death, the leading man and his son couldn't take good care of themselves, but they still had to live in a life without their lovely family. Several years later, the heroine came back in the rainy season which was the most joyful time that they had ever had. Although she had brought back to life, she couldn't remember anything with her son and husband. In the end of the story, the leading man and his son tried hard to help their lovely family remember the happy time they once had. However, the heroine still had to return with the sweet memory in the end of the rainy season.